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This was only ment to be a Facebook status but it went into something bigger and I ended up for the first time (found so hard to put into words because its taken me so long to come to terms) cominging out with my true feelings of exactley what I feel inside my heart ever since I lost my anagel.


Please let me not what you think.


Why do people lie to me by saying time is a healer because the more time goes on the pain inside of me gets worse.Even just the thought of you not being here makes it grow stronger and stronger.Ever since you left I feel so empty inside.My heart will forever be broken and I will never be able to handle the reality that your not here anymore or the fact I will never see your face again.You were my strength that helped me go on and now your gone I just find it so hard to carry on.I cant take the pain of having to live without you and being made to do so is to much to bare.I know I will see you again but until then you will always be with me and I promise I will love you now and for all eternity
 
I don't know if this fits in here, but if you do listen to this clip you will find it's reflective.

This is the Eulogy that Ted Kennedy gave for his brother Bobby Kennedy. Part of the Eulogy is actually taken from excerpts from Bobby's famous speech to the students of a South African university in 1966.

Many say this is one of Ted Kennedy's most moving speeches as well. The last part always gets me. You'll know what I mean once you listen to it.....

Here is the link-



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Thank you Mugsysam for posting that. Words that reach to the core of my being when I listen to them.
 
beautifull girl:

beautifull girl dont ya no u are my world
u make my love un fold truth be told

beautifull girl u took my breath and i fight to the death for this love
beautifull girl u are all i see baby its just u and me

beautifull girl i feel ya close and its always gonna be you i love the most

this is only 10% complete and is just an idea i wrote on the back on a recipt
 
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girl i need to feel u next to me
love in its eternity
holding u close
i love u the most

i saw pictures of you then colour seperated
like black and blue

think about the times i said shit like i love you
but whats a man to do ?

we whent trough phases that much is true
its true i love u i hate u and bitch i made you
but dont ya ever let a man intimidate you

i write real music shit that pepole reltate too
and u should be greatfull that i picked up this pen for all of you
go to the bar and ball wit u

if i was shot down i think i would crawl to you
so thanks for the information
if my heart was a party you got the first invetation

seems i can only write love songs
maybe my heart aint strong enough
for all the shit that gone on
 
fortune and shame:

girl i feel i wanna swim in youre eyes
i need u forever i need u now more than ever

somin bout that smile a touch i aint felt in a while

and baby i want u to carry my child
i cant mach what we had for that i am glad

everyday without you was a battle im trapped in a cage i cannot rattle

i bled for u women i am dead for u women

half a world away it seems like just yesterday
when in dreams it was you i saw and i no nothing i can do

i feel i have lived and died in ure name the love u have
better than any form of fame

fortune and shame
 
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man_in_the_mirror said:
fortune and shame:

girl i feel i wanna swim in youre eyes
i need u forever i need u now more than ever

somin bout that smile a touch i aint felt in a while

and baby i want u to carry my child
i cant mach what we had for that i am glad

everyday without you was a battle im trapped in a cage i cannot rattle

i bled for u women i am dead for u women

half a world away it seems like just yesterday
when in dreams it was you i saw and i no nothing i can do

i feel i have lived and died in ure name the love u have
better than any form of fame

fortune and shame
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wow!! Do you have any recorded stuff we can hear??

Jackie xxx
 
When I finally heard your seraphic voice,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

It was as if the hurt I felt wasn't there,,,

As if I was all along in your care,,,

As if you were always lighting my way,,,

As if on your lap I rested and lay,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,

All I wish is a look upon your face,,,

I'm not allowed by time nor place,,,

For the magic of your luminous smile,,,

Outshines the bright stars with style,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

Beside you the pricey looks cheap,,,

You're with me even in my sleep,,,

Without you my world is nothing but ash,,,

And everything will simply fail and crash,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

My heart is filled with a burning flame,,,

I love you more than I could possibly claim,,,

Come on and show me the beauty of life,,,

I beg you remove this piercing knife,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

I am imprisoned at the bottom of the dark sea,,,

My lady please have mercy over me,,,

Release me from this haunting nightmare,,,

It's you who can free me! Babe I swear,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

I am made from flexible clay,,,

You can shape me in your desired way,,,

Even the beauty of the expanding skies,,,

Is no match for that of your charming eyes,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

Nothing on this world could keep us apart,,,

For nothing can remove you throne in my heart,,,

My insightful eyes can no longer see,,,

How can they? when you're away from me,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

I am your captive at the war of love,,,

Do with me what you please, my alluring dove,,,

You’re the only beauty distinguished like a swan,,,

You stole my enchanted heart, and away you ran,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

Of you, my love, I always dream,,,

Show me, honey, what you deem,,,

But in my dream you never look back,,,

Then you fade and everything turns black,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

So I'll ask you my eternal queen,,,

Do you understand what I say and mean?,,,

What will be your deciding choice?,,,

Will condemn me to suffer or make me rejoice?,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,

If you really love me, end this separation,,,

Let’s satisfy this tremendous anticipation,,,

Because without you, I’ll bid this world goodbye,,,

Without my eternal love, I’d much rather die,,,

*That's what happened when I heard your voice,,,, It finally made me able to rejoice,,,
 
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hahahaha

yeah uh ok

stil on top of my game
still rising to fame
still girls scream the name
still a lion u cant tame

if u come for the fam i will smack yo bitch down
if u think u can get to the c.e.o themm damm
if u think u half the man i am

we coming for u
we gunning u
we whipping yo glass ass

and u gonna smash
and u aint gonna last

this are year
this aint got fear

and the ass whipping real near

that i wrote against my enemy
 
How many times have I told you I love you? Truth is, I love you more. My hurt and madness definitely ensure. You make my body shiver to the very core. You are what I eternally long for. Just like a magical elixir in a folklore. Your beauty's enchanting and your merits lure. What's more serene, you or a quite shore? The answer my lady is you for sure. When will you be knocking on my rusty door? To you my loyalty I've pledged and swore. My heart is anguished by the loneliness it bore. Without you, a graveyard is for my dance the floor. So, babe, hurry for my soul is fading and my body's sore. I'm waiting right here by my rusty door.
 
ohhh girl u no its over u ran out of luck bitch i aint no 4 leaf clover
this is over leave walk out see ifi care
but when u was in pain who was there
it was me i swear

if i was paper is it my heart u would tear
 
youre touch is like gold
you are to preciosu for another man to hold
you are my angel baby
you my angel maybe

i love you
i want you
i need you
i feel you

i want it to be just us
i want it more than ever
i want it soft like a feather
i want it more and more

its like water its pure
its like metal its strong
its like loving you is right
its like without you im fake


ohhh come on now baby!!!
 
man_in_the_mirror said:
hahahaha

yeah uh ok

stil on top of my game
still rising to fame
still girls scream the name
still a lion u cant tame

if u come for the fam i will smack yo bitch down
if u think u can get to the c.e.o themm damm
if u think u half the man i am

we coming for u
we gunning u
we whipping yo glass ass

and u gonna smash
and u aint gonna last

this are year
this aint got fear

and the ass whipping real near

that i wrote against my enemy
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Not aimed at ya, you made me wanna write this


I’ll put you down
Cause you’re a mere clown
Welcome to my town

In this game I own
Showing you what has never been shown
So stay back or gonna make you moan

I’m the sovereign of rhymes
Supreme at all times
I make millions and you a few dimes

That’s a rock solid fact
You can’t beat me no matter how you act
Nothing in you remains intact

That’s how I play
You better hope and pray
That you don’t become a prey

I got the lyrics and got the beat
You ain’t got nothing but defeat
So enjoy the show, have a seat
 
People are inspired when they see other people embracing whatever they are passionate about. I like writing and lyrics and seeing people like you constantly writing and elevating their game is inspiring.
 
zizousama said:
Not aimed at ya, you made me wanna write this


I’ll put you down
Cause you’re a mere clown
Welcome to my town

In this game I own
Showing you what has never been shown
So stay back or gonna make you moan

I’m the sovereign of rhymes
Supreme at all times
I make millions and you a few dimes

That’s a rock solid fact
You can’t beat me no matter how you act
Nothing in you remains intact

That’s how I play
You better hope and pray
That you don’t become a prey

I got the lyrics and got the beat
You ain’t got nothing but defeat
So enjoy the show, have a seat
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wow this is great!!!! xxxx
 
Just wrote this...

You used to be an open book, and now became a maze... You used to give me reassurance, but now you daze. What has befallen our love, I wonder... I’m left alone without it, left in the darkness to blunder... I used to be your entire world, and now, I seem to be left out of it... A story that could never make sense or fit... You said you still truly love me, but I cannot believe... Now I’m not saying that you scheme and deceive... But you most certainly love me no more... And I don’t know what fate has for me in store... But I see so clearly this agonizing fact... That your heart forgot despite our secret love pact... But a loving heart does not forget with no reason... The devotion so strong, it leaves no room for treason... That’s why I tell you that your story does not add up... That’s why my loving heart got finally fed up... And if you like I can add more evidence to support my case... And most certainly leave for all doubts on place... You see, nothing can harm the soul more than neglection... Not even all that you see in the pages of Science Fiction... How can you not feel the pain in my heart... Everyone can feel it be they slow or smart... Because the cries of my heart reach the farthest land... A heart that so desperately cries for your caring hand... Everyone on the planet could clearly feel my anguish... But I cannot persevere through and vanquish... So I simply cannot accept that you could not see... A suffering that is deeper than the deepest sea... To not see that you must have no emotion... You must not know the true meaning of love and devotion... Love is not just a word we say... It means to stand firm for each other and never sway... Now I know that you do not hold me in high regard... I know that now, but it is always painful and so hard... To know that your dear lady has forsaken you... To finally understand that and get the heartbreaking cue... But with a girl so cruel I better cut all ties... My heart cannot put up with cruelty this size... I promise that one day you’ll surely see... The tragic consequences of neglection and cruelty... For you’ll never find someone that loves you like I do... Loneliness and regret will take their toll on you... One day you’ll need someone to keep you from becoming sad... But never again will you have what we once had... Now my heart must bid you goodbye... It is its time to fall apart and die
 
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Glad you found it interesting. What I write is the embodiment of my feelings and it is always rewarding and comforting to see that what I wrote has reached someone. It means that my feelings reached them too. I am form Saudi Arabia.
 
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We write words of emotion
girl u are my devotion
ain't no one better than
I'm a veteran

To ya game of lies the passes and tries
the falls and lies
cos I'm th shit u the flies

That's why I came to terrories
the pop charts
she warms me inside like pop tarts

This ain't x factor
this is the real factor

What does it take for fame
hat does I take for 30000 to scream ure name

If i could return this I would
addiction us somin I no I should
fight to the end
 
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zizousama said:
Glad you found it interesting. What I write is the embodiment of my feelings and it is always rewarding and comforting to see that what I wrote has reached someone. It means that my feelings reached them too. I am form Saudi Arabia.
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aww kool keep up the great work xxx
 
man_in_the_mirror said:
We write words of emotion
girl u are my devotion
ain't no one better than
I'm a veteran

To ya game of lies the passes and tries
the falls and lies
cos I'm th shit u the flies

That's why I came to terrories
the pop charts
she warms me inside like pop tarts

This ain't x factor
this is the teal factor

What does it take for fame
hat does I take for 30000 to scream ure name

If i could return this I would
addiction us somin I no I should
fight to the end
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wow you just keep em coming dont ya haha

:) xxxx
 
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