Thanks for posting that Friend. it's funny... Last weekend I wrote a poem about butterflies and obscurity–with a different concept embedded, I think... mine is about the advent of artistic recognition. I love your poem Friend.
Surprise
It is summer time
and every butterfly you ever saw—
pairs of them, dancing in the meadow,
delicate, pensive ballerinas, upstaging the dandelions,
clouds of them rising
from the gold-spun bush-grass at sunset
or flitting to safety between the roots in
the creek bed wall—
was once a chrysalis
waiting,
transforming
in obscurity
Here's another silly one that I wrote about me as a poet (sorry for being so narcissistic.)
Not an Entertainer
I’m not an entertainer
I’ve never been that way
I shy away from bright lights
I’m slow to have my say
That doesn’t mean I’m speechless
I rarely stop in fact
It’s just that I prefer
A private tête-à-tête
I hope that I’m amusing
At least from time to time
But humour’s not my strong point
I’m seriously-inclined
Intensity’s my second name
And Earnest should come next
If ‘deep and meaningful’s’ what you want
I’m probably the best
My modus operandi
Communiqué of choice
Is poetry and prose ‘my dear’
(I use a florid voice)
I’m rather fond of adjectives
And sentimental notions
I like it when I sound profound
And write down the quotation
Archaic wording woos me
Romance of days gone by
I know it’s not contemporary
But I tend to croon and sigh
So if my art’s not popular
Not witty, chic or dry
I hope at least it’s touching
To the odd passer-by
Oh yes! Now THAT'S an entertainer! :wub:dim, this one's in response to your Not an entertainer.... giggles, for one who is:wub:
the performance
the sun above dances in time
moving with him, as he chants his rhyme
spinning below, he lands on a dime
his power over nature should be a crime
to kiss those lips would be sublime
as he crosses himself, church bells chime
angel wings reach out, and about him entwine
bringing out his glow, brighter than the sun's shine
the universe cannot hold back a perceptible whine
as he brings to a close his song, his dance, and his look, for a time.
TY, friend(hugs) to you fujon. your poem is so sweet :wub: i know what you mean about our universe rotating around that special someone who makes life worthwhile even the bad things are easier to bear knowing they are in our lives. i'm so happy to see you post a poem hope that muse continues to visit you and we see more from you :flowers:
TY, friend:flowers:
You're too kind. I'm sorry, my english is not perfect...
...The Silhouette...
I see you.. like a gray smoke in the gloom
You have again risen near me,
In the speechless of the night in my room
Your silhouette standing in front of me..
I wish to hear your voice and to tell you about the love & care,
But I can't move and I'm afraid, you'll disappear...
The candles are glowing, their light sparkling in the air,
Please, don't be afraid, I'm here for you and I do care.
I sense your soul, I sense your heart,
You wanted be Loved.. but they rip you apart...
You was left with no choice, all alone with a knife
And how you used it, they gave a birth to the lie...
You trusted to friends, to a few, very dear,
We're always with you and never disappear.
Come to me, let me hug you and do you hear?
I hope, my Prayers of Help for you will be Heard!
Oh yes! Now THAT'S an entertainer! :wub:
Thank you, friendWoo Hoo!!! I love it! i got one you might like giggles. i'll send it to you in pm
TY Very Much everyone :flowers:
...On the edge... of the new beginning...
All alone lost in the darkness of the night..
Just the cold stars sparkling in the sky,
They're the mute witnesses of my life,
the one who knows everything: my love, my hopes and the wishes to die..
The cold wind gently touches my hair..
I hope you still thinking of me, loves me? If not, I wish to disappear...
The way I met you, I think it meant to be..
I heard your voice, I saw your smile and I was lost in yours reality.
The land of sweet love and a deep care, it all blew my mind like a fresh air..
No matter where you go or where you're,
I flying around you like the Moon around the Earth & Sun,
You're the Life and the Light for me, all in the One.
You're my center... without you.. I'll disappear, too...
Looking at the night sky...
Should I pray for life or better to die?
My thoughts and emotions are frozen inside.
Sometimes they drop and break like a glass or an ice,
small pieces... sparkling.. like the stars on the sky...
The night is gone.. I see the sunrise...
Your smile popped up in my mind at once..
My thoughts are melting.. I leave space for hope..
Because, I believe, I'm Blessed to know You.