Karice
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I've decided to write another Dave story, with Dave finally deciding that enough is enough with Rob, his enemy who is always beating him up.... I've wrote about Rob in a bad light, as he should be written in....
P.S. Admins and moderators, please do not delete or close this thread. I like writing my Dave stories.... Please, I am begging you.......
Part 1.
I’m tired of Robert Patterson always beating me up. I never did anything wrong to him. I’ve always been nice to him. He always taunts me. Even after I called an ambulance for him after he fell off of a roof. He was in the hospital for a little while, and then released, on crutches. Now he’s off the crutches….
I went to my English class, and Rob passed my room door. He put his fist under his chin and begun demonstrating beating me up. I felt uneasy.
After class, I started running but Rob caught up to me and pushed me to the ground and beat me up.
“Leave me alone, Rob!” I yelled. Rob is about half a taller than me and 60 pounds heavier than I am. He’s a year older than me.
He continued to pummel on me. I was scared, yet I knew it was coming. Rob does this to me every day. And, he only does it to ME. He doesn’t beat on anyone else.
“Rob, get off of me,” I pleaded. “You’re gonna kill me!” I begged emotionally.
Rob beat me even harder! Then he laughed cruelly. George Anderson came by.
“That’s enough, Robert!” George said, sternly. George used to beat me up to, until I saved him from drowning. Now he’s eternally grateful to me and nice to me.
Rob got off of me.
If he hadn’t saved you from drowning, you would have been beating him up with me,” Rob said to George sneering.
“You don’t hurt the hand that saved you from an early grave,” George said with a sneer.
Rob sneered back and left.
George looked at me. “You know, you’re a real angel to have saved me. You could have easily left me to die.” He looked indebted.
“You’re welcome,” I said.
I went to my other classes.
“I’m Dave Winston, a 15 year old at Marshall Johnson Academy for boys. I’m a brown-haired, brown eyed 125 pound guy. I’m 5’8, gay, and recently protested for we gays to have equal rights as the straight people on this campus. We won our rights. My younger long lost brother protested with me too. I found out that he was adopted, which is why I didn’t even know about him until he came to this school. Our biological parents and his adopted parents had him transferred after he got raped and then attempted suicide. His name is Jack, and we still keep in touch. I have a boyfriend named Max Cartwright, who is 17. He had blond hair and blue eyes, and is 6’1.
I went to lunch. I ate lunch with my 8 friends, Rudy, Randy, Rodney, Randall, Steve, Todd, Mark, and Sam. Jack was the 9th friend.
We chatted and then lunch was over. I went to more classes and did my assignments. After school, I went into my dorm and did homework and watched T.V.
I went to Student Life Inside. I sat for a few minutes. I saw Rob coming towards me! I ran, but Rob is a very fast runner and caught up to me! He punched me in my stomach!
“Rob, please leave me alone,” I cried weakly.
“George isn’t around to protect you this time,” Rob said evilly. He kicked me in my shin.
“Rob stop.” I begged him. I could barely speak.
“No!” Rob cried. He punched me in my face.
I got fed up with him. “I said,” Leave me the fu…. alone!” “I cried with all the strength I could muster. Rob looked surprised.
I decided it was time to stand up for myself. I said, “Rob, I take back all of the fear I gave you. I’m not going to be afraid of you anymore. You’re nothing. You’re shi. And from now on, you don’t exist to me.” I got that speech I had just said from Nightmare on Elm Street, where Nancy stands up to Freddy, and Freddy disappears.
Well, Rob is like Freddy Krueger. He is just pure evil.
Rob laughed cruelly. It didn’t work.
He pushed me hard. “You are too afraid of me to ever pretend I don’t exist,” he said, with an evil smile.
“I…I….I mean it,” I said, stammering. “You don’t exist anymore to me.
Rob punched me hard in my face. “So, how do you explain a non-existent punch in your face?” He sneered. He punched me again in my stomach. Then he picked me up and dropped me to the floor. Then he picked me up and threw me into a wall. He mercilessly beat me up.
“Ow, Stop,” I protested weakly.
“What are you saying, “Ow” about? I don’t exist!” Rob sneered. He punched me in my arm.
I tried to run again, but Rob jumped on me again and slammed my head into the ground.
“Rob, stop,” I begged.
“No!” He screamed at me.
“What’s your problem?” I asked him.
“You,” he answered. He sneered again.
“I never did anything to you,” I said, weakly. “Please get off of me,” I begged.
“No!” Rob hollered again. He continued to pummel me. “Please stop,” I begged weakly.
Rob did the opposite of stop. He hit me even more. I could feel the life draining out of me. I began to lose conscious. In one more minute, I was in a mini coma.
P.S. Admins and moderators, please do not delete or close this thread. I like writing my Dave stories.... Please, I am begging you.......
Part 1.
I’m tired of Robert Patterson always beating me up. I never did anything wrong to him. I’ve always been nice to him. He always taunts me. Even after I called an ambulance for him after he fell off of a roof. He was in the hospital for a little while, and then released, on crutches. Now he’s off the crutches….
I went to my English class, and Rob passed my room door. He put his fist under his chin and begun demonstrating beating me up. I felt uneasy.
After class, I started running but Rob caught up to me and pushed me to the ground and beat me up.
“Leave me alone, Rob!” I yelled. Rob is about half a taller than me and 60 pounds heavier than I am. He’s a year older than me.
He continued to pummel on me. I was scared, yet I knew it was coming. Rob does this to me every day. And, he only does it to ME. He doesn’t beat on anyone else.
“Rob, get off of me,” I pleaded. “You’re gonna kill me!” I begged emotionally.
Rob beat me even harder! Then he laughed cruelly. George Anderson came by.
“That’s enough, Robert!” George said, sternly. George used to beat me up to, until I saved him from drowning. Now he’s eternally grateful to me and nice to me.
Rob got off of me.
If he hadn’t saved you from drowning, you would have been beating him up with me,” Rob said to George sneering.
“You don’t hurt the hand that saved you from an early grave,” George said with a sneer.
Rob sneered back and left.
George looked at me. “You know, you’re a real angel to have saved me. You could have easily left me to die.” He looked indebted.
“You’re welcome,” I said.
I went to my other classes.
“I’m Dave Winston, a 15 year old at Marshall Johnson Academy for boys. I’m a brown-haired, brown eyed 125 pound guy. I’m 5’8, gay, and recently protested for we gays to have equal rights as the straight people on this campus. We won our rights. My younger long lost brother protested with me too. I found out that he was adopted, which is why I didn’t even know about him until he came to this school. Our biological parents and his adopted parents had him transferred after he got raped and then attempted suicide. His name is Jack, and we still keep in touch. I have a boyfriend named Max Cartwright, who is 17. He had blond hair and blue eyes, and is 6’1.
I went to lunch. I ate lunch with my 8 friends, Rudy, Randy, Rodney, Randall, Steve, Todd, Mark, and Sam. Jack was the 9th friend.
We chatted and then lunch was over. I went to more classes and did my assignments. After school, I went into my dorm and did homework and watched T.V.
I went to Student Life Inside. I sat for a few minutes. I saw Rob coming towards me! I ran, but Rob is a very fast runner and caught up to me! He punched me in my stomach!
“Rob, please leave me alone,” I cried weakly.
“George isn’t around to protect you this time,” Rob said evilly. He kicked me in my shin.
“Rob stop.” I begged him. I could barely speak.
“No!” Rob cried. He punched me in my face.
I got fed up with him. “I said,” Leave me the fu…. alone!” “I cried with all the strength I could muster. Rob looked surprised.
I decided it was time to stand up for myself. I said, “Rob, I take back all of the fear I gave you. I’m not going to be afraid of you anymore. You’re nothing. You’re shi. And from now on, you don’t exist to me.” I got that speech I had just said from Nightmare on Elm Street, where Nancy stands up to Freddy, and Freddy disappears.
Well, Rob is like Freddy Krueger. He is just pure evil.
Rob laughed cruelly. It didn’t work.
He pushed me hard. “You are too afraid of me to ever pretend I don’t exist,” he said, with an evil smile.
“I…I….I mean it,” I said, stammering. “You don’t exist anymore to me.
Rob punched me hard in my face. “So, how do you explain a non-existent punch in your face?” He sneered. He punched me again in my stomach. Then he picked me up and dropped me to the floor. Then he picked me up and threw me into a wall. He mercilessly beat me up.
“Ow, Stop,” I protested weakly.
“What are you saying, “Ow” about? I don’t exist!” Rob sneered. He punched me in my arm.
I tried to run again, but Rob jumped on me again and slammed my head into the ground.
“Rob, stop,” I begged.
“No!” He screamed at me.
“What’s your problem?” I asked him.
“You,” he answered. He sneered again.
“I never did anything to you,” I said, weakly. “Please get off of me,” I begged.
“No!” Rob hollered again. He continued to pummel me. “Please stop,” I begged weakly.
Rob did the opposite of stop. He hit me even more. I could feel the life draining out of me. I began to lose conscious. In one more minute, I was in a mini coma.
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