School Help: Can Someone Please Look Over Paper &.....

[BillieJean84]

Hey now I know no-one can 'edit' any papers however I have to turn in a paper for school and was wondering if someone could just look it over for me and help me out as far as grammar & it has to be in APA format and still quite not sure if its done correctly.

Don't tell me to ask the teacher thats why I'm here. Thanks...


p.s. its due today