Well..I loved your article very well written. I just have one problem.......I wish you had not referred to him as "W**** J****" he hated that name and found to be very hurtful. I also found it to be very disrespectful to call him that. Maybe you should of added that to your article. How he should of been addressed as Mr. Jackson, or Michael Jackson. So unfortunately you wrote your first article and already wrote it like the pro's. disrespecting Michael's name. Please remember this for future articles, sometimes the good things you are writing about are over shadowed by the way the subject is addressed. Respect will always reap its own reward.
Well said.
Well..I loved your article very well written. I just have one problem.......I wish you had not referred to him as "W**** J****" he hated that name and found to be very hurtful. I also found it to be very disrespectful to call him that. Maybe you should of added that to your article. How he should of been addressed as Mr. Jackson, or Michael Jackson. So unfortunately you wrote your first article and already wrote it like the pro's. disrespecting Michael's name. Please remember this for future articles, sometimes the good things you are writing about are over shadowed by the way the subject is addressed. Respect will always reap its own reward.
Yeah you got it! ThanksHe/she was accentuating the contrast between what the media has tried to convey Michael as and what Paris just proved was the real him. It was in quotation marks after all. Used in context as a tool of irony and mockery of the media, using that otherwise disgusting name-pair is excusable, in my opinion. But only then! Good article!
Brilliant, well written article. You should be proud of yourself for putting into words what millions are thinking.
Well done!
Yeah i didn't actually give the title i named it "Don't take away their childhood" but the paper edited it a bit...Great article, thank you so much, but the headline is not approptiate, wished you wouldn't have written J**** but JACKSON! Whatever kind of retorical purpose it has.
No problems..This is what we need more of. Thanks for being the voice of sanity Cheeko.
Cheeko didn't write the title...the paper did that.
And it was beautifully written
thank you for the article. this is great
i remembered 20/20 (1997) interview yesterday. i remember him saying that he wanted his children to remember him as a father that did whatever he could to make them happy. and it made me cry because i realized that another of his dreams came true. he is so amazing. a truly truly unique
I like your article very much :yes:
It's so lovely when people have the courage to stand up like you did with this!
:cheers:
thank you for reading it like i said a lot of inspiration has come from peoples comments on here...Thank you for writing that article!
Very well said... hope everyone could read this tbh!
ThanksHey well done on that. I read an article last week that was awful about Michaels passing, and its the only time I've taken part in this sort of thing so I text BORE for the other guy, had I seen yours I would'a said MORE. Good for you.
The media should burn in hell. I don't get how journalists aren't ashamed of themselves.